Some people say an urban city is a better residence while some argue that the countryside is. Discuss from both points of view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, with the infrastructure of urban cities developing in many countries, they have become highly populated, resulting in the lower popularity of countryside areas. Some say living in a city can give a better living standard whereas some argue that rural places are healthier and more peaceful. In this essay, I will shed some light on this topic from both viewpoints and give my opinion.
On the one hand, a growing number of people believe that city life can offer a better quality of life. By that I mean urban facilities such as adequate education and health can be taken advantage of. Especially regarding public transport, city dwellers can reach their desired destination with ease and comfort, which backwater towns lack. Moreover, it is a common belief that better opportunities for job aspects and studies are predominantly found in a city. Therefore, the young generation migrates to eye-opening urban areas to pursue their dream careers and goals.
On the other hand, some people argue that living in the countryside has many advantages from its own perspective. For instance, the environment gives you peace of mind as there is no noise, fewer crowds, and no vibrant places. Recent studies also show that local inhabitants in rural areas live relatively longer than urban residents on average. It is said to result from less pollution due to traffic jams, industrial areas, and access to fresh meat and vegetables.
To summarize, both the city and the countryside possess different good characteristics. On balance, however, I would like to extend my support to the prior opinion as a particular city is a favorable residence for young or old people as better education and high income are guaranteed and healthcare systems are provided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and healthcare systems are provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for instance, i mean, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20905923345 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83975759366 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2854330698 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334504919257 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960948321158 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077558008827 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189103096698 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872589602329 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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