Percentage of UK people who consumed the daily recommended
The bar graph gives information about the proportion of UK residents who take in a great deal of fruit and vegetables on a daily basis based on suggestions in three years 2002, 2006, and 2010.
As can be seen from the graph, it is apparent that there was a downward trend in consuming fresh fruit and vegetables among males, females, and children throughout the mentioned period. Noticeably, among the three surveyed target audiences, women’s consumption fruit and vegetables were far higher than the two remaining groups.
In 2002, the percentage of the recommended amount of fruit and vegetables everyday that the British of both genders, namely male and female, consumed was nearly the same. Regarding men, this gender consumed over a fifth, while the proportion of women consumption was roughly 25%. In the next 4 years, both sexes witnessed a dramatical increase, which shared the same pattern ratio growth by approximately 10%. Both female and male consumption of fruit and vegetables reached the highest point with roughly 32% for the former and 27% for the latter. In 2010, there was a sharp decrease in the consumption of the two genders, falling around 7% for each.
In terms of children’s daily consumption of fruit and vegetables was much lower than the other groups, accounting for just over one in ten in 2002. 4 years later, this percentage experienced a rapid rise to nearly 16% before dropping by 2% in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ommended amount of fruit and vegetables everyday that the British of both genders, namel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02928870293 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73883811535 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589958158996 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4485293774 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138875355923 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507060984894 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557951993136 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819319666867 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387078593707 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.