The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The rise of manufacturing consumer products leads to environmental damage. This essay will discuss possible reasons for this and steps that can be taken to tackle the problem.
To commence with that notion, there are several reasons for this situation. the first reason is that the increasing population has led to higher demands for consumers merchandises. Therefore, companies have to expand their production and it results in a higher amount of emissions which worsens the problem of air pollution. Furthermore, to transport the goods quickly and easily the suppliers have to wrap up all of their products by plastic. Although it makes the process of packaging and selling activities become more convenient and common, it is also one of the most popular causes associated with greenhouse gas emissions. Because of making from recycled elements, it might take a long time to decompose the detrimental components, even most of them are non-biodegraded, which turn out the planet into a huge landfill and pose a threat to the living habitat of creatures.
Actions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts on the environment arising from the rising amount of consumer goods. Firstly, governments should encourage companies to promote the use of alternative sources of energy such as solar power to reduce the use of fossil fuels. As a result, this will ease the problem of air pollution and contribute to environmental protection. Secondly, the alternative is to encourage citizens to start using eco-friendly materials instead. For instance, the giant nutrition milk Milo has recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made of materials like paper. In addition, the leadership should also launch a campaign to raise people's awareness about this current problem so that they will have universal recognition of their behavior. From that, they will be eager to purchase green items and organic products, which are pretty environmentally friendly.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons why the environment is severely impacted by the increase in the production of consumer goods. To address this issue, governments and corporations must join hands to make the production lines more friendly by switching to greener materials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3893557423 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97761606984 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591036414566 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9693412569 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238089456763 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730775642803 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616341708471 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16230712382 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055441596153 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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