The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots

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The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.

The diagram details a process by which clay pots are made.

Overall, the manufacturing of pots can be divided into three stages, beginning with the excavation of raw materials with a digger, followed by its treatment in various ways, and finishing with the molding of pots in special forms and then baking them in high-temperature ovens.

The process commences with digging the clay and transporting it to a factory, where it is crushed first into lumps and then it into pellets by means of crushing machines. After that, these granular pieces are mixed in a mixer with water that goes through a tap. The process is continued with the aggregate forced through the pipe and cast right into the moulds consisting of two parts.

The next stage is the drying of these raw pots for four to six days, after which the moulding parts are taken apart and the pots are put in a high temperature oven, where the pots are baked at one thousand degrees Celsius. Later, they are colored manually and then again put in the oven for color firing. As soon as pots are finished, they are put in big stacks to be delivered for the retail.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.655 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45005612181 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5223026041 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130616958354 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555994332447 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620692314396 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901249226152 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568861666316 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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