Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only the state and lages business can nake a difference. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion since the citizens keep a huge function in the improvement of atmosphere. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, not only governments and large companies the awareness of each individuals keep a great role to protect the environment. We can not negate that governments and large companies have a plenty of appropriate plan and ideal to make a difference in the improvement of atmosphere such as using morden technology to filter water or air to solve water pollution and air pollution, but that active will become insignficant when it do not have consensus and efforts from the individuals. Furthermore, many large companies can be the reason and lead terrible influence to the environment especially with source water and air. For instance, fuel business can discharge their oil into the river, lake and beach, this trend will make horrible affect to the people.
In addition, government should not too concentrate in morden technology and leave in the campaign to improve awareness of each individuals, because they are the key element of that problem. To illustrate, each person need to change their habit do not discharge garbage, garbage and durty things into the atmosphere then our environment will improve graduately. Moreover, the individuals acount for almost number of human, so each citizen change their awareness better following that, our social and environment will be greener and cleaner.
To conclude, by my reason and agruement from these essay individuals keep a great function for the improvement of environment. also government should have bright plan to help the social and people life better than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20134228188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8884256209 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0910122626 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32291689228 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108550638452 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948080253792 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17879555699 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096205745996 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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