The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend. "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
According to the homeowner letter, he concludes that if someone wants to sell their home quicker and at a good price, they should use Adams Realty instead of Fitch Realty. To prove his point he has mention different facts and figures. The argument is not persuasive enough and it is logically not right.
First, the homeowner mention that Adams Realty is superior compare to Fitch Realty. He says this on the base that Adams have 40 real estate agent and Fitch only has 25. In Fitch out of 25 agent, many work part time. This is not a reason to consider that Adam Realty is superior. We do not know how many part time workers work of Adams. It could also be possible that even after Adams having more number of the agents, they are not that much efficient as the agent working in Fitch Realty. Unless, we know about the number of part time agent in Adams and what is the efficiency of both the realty we cannot conclude anything.
Secondly, the homeowner in the letter claims that the revenue earned last year by Adams realty were double than the Fitch Realty and to support his claim he mention that the average price of house sold with Adams is $24,000 mores than the Fitch. This could have happen that Adam could have sold less number of houses as a result the average price per house got increase. Unless, we know about the number of house sold by each Realty we cannot conclude anything.
Thirdly, to strength the claim, the homeowner in his letter mentions the real life example which he had faced. He told that ten years ago when he wanted to sell his house, he listed his house with Fitch and it took four months before it was sold, but last year when he sold another house this time used the service of Adams Realty and the house was sold in one month. It could have happen that the condition a decade ago would be very different than the condition last year. It could have happen that the economy could be bad and the people would not be buying new houses ten years ago, but now the economic is stable and people are investing in new homes. Unless, we know about the condition ten years ago we cannot conclude that Adam Realty sells homes faster than Fitch.
Unless, we come to know about all the things like how many part time workers are working in the Adam and how much efficient if each realty we cannot conclude that the Adams Realty sells the houses quicker and at a good price. To make his point stronger the homeowner should mention all the facts which are written above.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'agent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agents'.
Suggestion: agents
...the base that Adams have 40 real estate agent and Fitch only has 25. In Fitch out of ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'agent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agents'.
Suggestion: agents
...d Fitch only has 25. In Fitch out of 25 agent, many work part time. This is not a rea...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...25. In Fitch out of 25 agent, many work part time. This is not a reason to consider that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ty is superior. We do not know how many part time workers work of Adams. It could also be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 526, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ty. Unless, we know about the number of part time agent in Adams and what is the efficien...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...itch Realty and to support his claim he mention that the average price of house sold wi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...0 mores than the Fitch. This could have happen that Adam could have sold less number o...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e average price per house got increase. Unless, we know about the number of house sold...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...se was sold in one month. It could have happen that the condition a decade ago would b...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...on a decade ago would be very different than the condition last year. It could have ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
... the condition last year. It could have happen that the economy could be bad and the p...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 658, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and people are investing in new homes. Unless, we know about the condition ten years ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...know about all the things like how many part time workers are working in the Adam and how...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 28.8173652695 177% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 458.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44104803493 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96354623463 2.78398813304 71% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408296943231 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 4.96107784431 323% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4773128886 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3164514482 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124240143726 0.0743258471296 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106983504548 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205359161088 0.128457276422 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106864524446 0.0628817314937 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.5979740519 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.32208582834 80% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'agent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agents'.
Suggestion: agents
...the base that Adams have 40 real estate agent and Fitch only has 25. In Fitch out of ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'agent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agents'.
Suggestion: agents
...d Fitch only has 25. In Fitch out of 25 agent, many work part time. This is not a rea...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...25. In Fitch out of 25 agent, many work part time. This is not a reason to consider that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ty is superior. We do not know how many part time workers work of Adams. It could also be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 526, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ty. Unless, we know about the number of part time agent in Adams and what is the efficien...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...itch Realty and to support his claim he mention that the average price of house sold wi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...0 mores than the Fitch. This could have happen that Adam could have sold less number o...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e average price per house got increase. Unless, we know about the number of house sold...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...se was sold in one month. It could have happen that the condition a decade ago would b...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...on a decade ago would be very different than the condition last year. It could have ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
... the condition last year. It could have happen that the economy could be bad and the p...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 658, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and people are investing in new homes. Unless, we know about the condition ten years ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...know about all the things like how many part time workers are working in the Adam and how...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 28.8173652695 177% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 458.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44104803493 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96354623463 2.78398813304 71% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408296943231 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 4.96107784431 323% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4773128886 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3164514482 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124240143726 0.0743258471296 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106983504548 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205359161088 0.128457276422 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106864524446 0.0628817314937 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.5979740519 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.32208582834 80% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.