in a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large money on constructing new railway lines for fast trains other believe money should be spent on existing transport.discuss bith view and give your opinion
In today’s time , means of transportation play a paramount role which helps an individual to be punctual in 21st century fast pacing world. Hence , a group of scholars emphasizes the need to develop new railway lines to connect different cities whereas others give priority for the amendment of existing modes of transportation. This essay will discuss both views along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with , the main point of the supporters of new railway lines is that it is essential in today’s highly polluted world. To be precise, nowadays industrialists are giving preference to commence new factories in small cities due to the fact that the resources are less economic in such areas as compared to metropolitan cities. These factories are also source of earning bread and butter of unemployed people. Hence, workers give priority of their own personal vehicles to reach at their workplace which is the major reason of pollution .If government would construct new railway lines for fast moving trains ,then people prefer trains as compared to their own car ,motorbike .To exemplify,90%workers in Delhi gives priority to metro to reach to their destination as it stops at all nearby cities .Thus, construction of new railway lines would be beneficial to reduce pollution.
On the other hand, second group is in the favour of the point that present day transportation should be improved. Precisely, the condition of government buses is so poor that people do not prefer to tansport through it in the fear of delay as most often any problem occurs in their working. Moreover, these transportation are also source of income for government and unemployed Meanwhile , if there condition may not be improved then they must be stopped. For instance, PRTC buses in Punjab are close to extinct due to their bad condition. So, their closure would effect the economy of a country.
To conclude , the condition of today transportation should be improved firstly because I think that construction of new railway lines would put extra burden on citizens in the form of taxes and it may also take a long time for construction .therefore, government first choice would be improving the state of present vehicles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11232876712 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94998978592 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553424657534 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.621349365 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265167931916 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080113301379 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057259266437 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160346476615 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346061763602 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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