Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the first source of knowledge for any child. The statement perfectly sums up the role of parents in the life of a person by stating that they are the best teachers. In my opinion, the knowledge imparted by parents, knowingly or unknowingly, has a great effect on the overall development of a person. I feel this way for several reasons that I will discuss in the following essay.
To begin with, right from the time we are born, we learn everything by observing the people around us and parents are the only people whose actions, behaviors, and way of life a child would observe for the initial years. Parents transform a person from being totally oblivious to the rules of the world into a social being. They teach us how to walk, speak, eat, behave, etc. in a proper manner. Be it these most fundamental things of human life, or more important life lessons like having compassion, a sense of collaboration, and responsibility; everything that a child learns or at least starts learning is from parents only. Thus, I would say parents are the first teacher in most aspects of anyone's life.
Secondly, one learns the all qualities required to be a successful and well-recognized person in life such as hard work, determination, persistence, and discipline from parents. I remember the struggling phase of my parents in their early career when I was a child. I have seen my mother waking up at 4 AM in the morning, doing all the household chores, cooking food for the entire family, and going to school where she worked as a teacher. She will come back home in the evening, and again continue with all the responsibilities. With such a busy schedule, she did her master's in arts, and bachelor's in education. I got enough motivation from her that I consider her my role model. The energy she has even currently at this age just amazes me.
Some may argue that, technically speaking parents may not be the best teachers for a child in an academic sense. However, one can not forget that being educated doesn't mean knowing some academic facts only. It also includes being a person who cares about others, helps people in need, and contributes his or her fair share to the society, community, and the nation they live in. Parents put the first block of the vast architecture that a child's life is. They are the people who we observe from literally day one, and most of our actions, and behavioral or social characteristics are nothing but us trying to emulate what we have learned from our parents.
To sum up, parents are the first and the best teacher of any child. All the basic things needed to survive in life, behavioral and social traits, ethics, morals, values, etc. that we learn from the first time is from them only.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s how to walk, speak, eat, behave, etc. in a proper manner. Be it these most fundamental things of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...d. I have seen my mother waking up at 4 AM in the morning, doing all the household chores, cookin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...at this age just amazes me. Some may argue that, technically speaking parents may ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... one can not forget that being educated doesnt mean knowing some academic facts only. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68737060041 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65366608366 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530020703934 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5944457657 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.56 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113579802524 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358506822295 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041582805277 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718148002353 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245744672614 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s how to walk, speak, eat, behave, etc. in a proper manner. Be it these most fundamental things of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...d. I have seen my mother waking up at 4 AM in the morning, doing all the household chores, cookin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...at this age just amazes me. Some may argue that, technically speaking parents may ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... one can not forget that being educated doesnt mean knowing some academic facts only. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68737060041 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65366608366 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530020703934 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5944457657 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.56 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113579802524 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358506822295 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041582805277 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718148002353 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245744672614 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.