The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph details the trend of shop closures and openings of new shops in one particular country over a seven-year period, between 2011 and 2018.
In general, the number of shop closures ranged between 5000 and 6500 within the timeline (with the exception of 2015). However, that of openings were all over the map. Interestingly, both closures and openings became fewer towards 2018.
On the one hand, the number of shops closed started at roughly 6500 in 2011. Then, the figure fluctuated over the next 3 years but the general trend was positive, even taking over the number of shop openings. Despite falling dramatically to below 1000, it rebounded back to above 5000 rapidly in 2016. The number remained steady in the last 2 years, finishing the period.
If we look at the data for shop openings, there was a massive decrease by half from around 8500 to 4000 in the first year. It saw a consistent increase to over 6000 in 2014, followed by a drop to the same figure in 2012. Having remained stable until 2017, it dipped slightly to 3000 in the last year of the period.
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe people should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss both views and give your own 78
- Some people say an urban city is a better residence while some argue that the countryside is Discuss from both points of view and give your opinion 84
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations 78
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 78
- The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...tween 5000 and 6500 within the timeline with the exception of 2015. However, that of openings were al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70157068063 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36809008739 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3206834733 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396889760657 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130767090717 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135211454999 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243224590838 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142316944241 0.0819641961636 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.