The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Besides the development of social media and the advantages it brings is a lot of problem in daily life. One of the feature issues is the use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. To exress my opinion about this, I absolutely don't believe that this replacement will bring the advantages out weigh the disadvantages.
As far as I know, today, people almost spend their time on their mobile phones and day by day, the daily conservations be rare. It does not have welcomes, words of concern, or sharing. All they need just their phones to chat, call, suff web, etc. Furthermore, building up the afraid of communication, lacking of self-confident; and the most common problem is living virtual. And sometimes, chatting would make misunderstanding in expressing our emotion.
On the other hand, the advantages of social medial is to help keeping up with other people easily, doing shopping without being out of home, working in distance and so on. Undeniably, the social media has brought a lot of advantages, but to say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages it's not true. All in all, face-to-face interaction still the best way to express thinks, emotion, ect.
Each issue also has two side, overviewing, beside the disadvantages, the use of social media has significant convenience in life. But in my point of view, it's not enough for replacement of face-to-face interaction among many people in society. It is just equipment which contribute to make our life better and better.
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- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...l media and the advantages it brings is a lot of problem in daily life. One of the feature issue...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ess my opinion about this, I absolutely dont believe that this replacement will brin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06317078256 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5009718023 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401069005454 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119054248172 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150086874506 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237960695194 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134822698389 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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