The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is something that one will care much about and they belong to. The author says to embrace peace and happiness, the authority should take care of all the members of the society. I strongly agree with it for the following reasons.
To start with, if the authority are not ready to take up proper responsibilities of their society, it can be a detrimental to all the people. One should question the authority if they aren't supporting the people or if they aren't doing their job properly. Fighting for one's need can never cause a problem in one's life. For instance, if people of India such as Lal Bahadur Shastri, Subashchandra Bose had not questioned the British, and fight for the people, India wouldn't have got the freedom so soon. All the sacrifices they've done for the society and the country is immense. From the above example, we can see that questioning the authority will always enhance the well being of the people of the society.
Moreover, even if the people question the government when they are doing a great job, there's nothing to lose or worry about. Questioning can never bring a problem as it will rather clear the misconception one is having. Suppose a person thinks what the government doing is wrong and questions the authority, they'll get a clear idea when the authority explains what they are doing and why they are doing. This will help the commoner to understand what is going on in their society. For instance, if the government has stopped the development in the infrastructure of the city, only when the commoners ask, they'll get to know the reason behind it. This might be due to lack of funds provided, or priortising some other work. So when the general people question the authority of what they're doing, is when they'll have a clear picture.
Additional to this, the authority can get more ideas and they'll be able to analyze what is harming the society and this can help them improve their work. Once someone question about what is happening, this can be an eye opening for the authority regarding that particular case. Even the ones who run the authority are just the people and people make mistakes. They might miss out on a few things as well. Only when the commoner engages with the authority, they'll be able to work together.
To conclude everything that I have mentioned above, authority plays an important role in enhancing and embracing the society. Questioning about the authority can never be wrong but will always help the people of the society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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...ritish, and fight for the people, India wouldnt have got the freedom so soon. All the s...
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Suggestion: they've
...the freedom so soon. All the sacrifices theyve done for the society and the country is...
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Suggestion: there's
...rnment when they are doing a great job, theres nothing to lose or worry about. Questio...
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Line 8, column 168, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'questions'.
Suggestion: questions
...p them improve their work. Once someone question about what is happening, this can be an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...he commoner engages with the authority, theyll be able to work together. To conclud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78341013825 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56170634536 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7550106523 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2608695652 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210493509812 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689658741566 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368250586425 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128284014269 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229680918303 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...e should question the authority if they arent supporting the people or if they arent ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... arent supporting the people or if they arent doing their job properly. Fighting for ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... doing their job properly. Fighting for ones need can never cause a problem in ones ...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... ones need can never cause a problem in ones life. For instance, if people of India ...
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Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ritish, and fight for the people, India wouldnt have got the freedom so soon. All the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...the freedom so soon. All the sacrifices theyve done for the society and the country is...
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Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...rnment when they are doing a great job, theres nothing to lose or worry about. Questio...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng is wrong and questions the authority, theyll get a clear idea when the authori...
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Line 6, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
... is wrong and questions the authority, theyll get a clear idea when the authority exp...
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Line 6, column 607, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
... the city, only when the commoners ask, theyll get to know the reason behind it. This ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 783, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...l people question the authority of what theyre doing, is when theyll have a clear pict...
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Line 6, column 805, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...authority of what theyre doing, is when theyll have a clear picture. Additional to ...
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Line 8, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...s, the authority can get more ideas and theyll be able to analyze what is harming the ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 168, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'questions'.
Suggestion: questions
...p them improve their work. Once someone question about what is happening, this can be an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 457, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...he commoner engages with the authority, theyll be able to work together. To conclud...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78341013825 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56170634536 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7550106523 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2608695652 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210493509812 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689658741566 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368250586425 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128284014269 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229680918303 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.