The chart above shows information about various professions in the U K and their salaries The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the

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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph gives information regarding a range of occupations and their salaries in the UK. The table below demonstrate the weekly average working hours in each career. Overall, it is obviously transparent that the amount of money which each profession earns in two different timeframe experiences a marginal disproportion.
In the period of starting, underground driver hits the highest value on the record of 50000 pounds. The second rank is firefighter accounting for 40000 pounds. Nurse is a job which exhibits the lowest figure, at 18000.
After three-year period, there is the same shift. In regard to underground driver, it still reaches a peak figuring at more than 1000 pounds than three years before. With each working( firefighter, nurse, underground driver), it sees an upward inch,by 1000 pounds whereas police increases by 2000.
In the table sector, firefighting holding the higher working hours than others, which comes up to 55. Forty hours belongs to police. Nurse and underground driver points at more than thirties (38 and 36 respectively). In spite of the fact that the number of wages underground driver be paid is higher than other professions, the working hours is the least.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...derground driver, it sees an upward inch,by 1000 pounds whereas police increases by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, still, whereas, in regard to, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22680412371 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79731207242 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4202162045 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15139810469 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554391440915 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692418484365 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925389884863 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899822386884 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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