Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Fierce competition among companies has driven advertisements to appear excessively on mainstream channels. In my opinion, it may affect consumers in a number of ways and feasible measures should be implemented to protect them from negative effects.
Product users who excessively expose to company commercials are either overwhelmed or likely to make wrong purchases. regarding the former, local brands which are seemingly common in clothing styles, for example, make an attempt to popularize their products with the aim of beating other opponents to become the best-seller. consequently, the widespread coverage of similar advertisements renders customers susceptible to advertising overload, leading to even the counter-effects where the targeted is no longer interested in those products. As regards the false purchases consequence, companies create a number of advertisements including exaggerated information and attractive sound or visual effects to promote sales and attract customers. However, customers have a propensity to buy inferior products as a result of misleading content, leading to them discarding unwanted products and a throw-away society consequently.
To protect the customers, the government is encouraged to exercise rigorous censorship on those advertisements for the sake of a better experience on mainstream channels and the assurance for accurate information conveyed to viewers. Moreover, several laws are enacted to limit platforms that companies use to broadcast their advertisements or introduce an exclusive period for advertising purposes. Similarly, customers are encouraged to select information carefully and put a certain skeptical weight on advertised products. Therefore, they could make wiser purchasing decisions by reading reviews from previous users.
To briefly conclude, customers are susceptible to overloaded advertisements and make false purchases as a negative effect, whereas the government and customers themselves are responsible for protecting users’ experience.
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- Consumers are faced with increasing Numbers of ads from competing companies To what extend do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them 89
- Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings while other people argue that it is wrong Discuss both views and give your opinion 11
- Consumers are faced with increasing Numbers of ads from competing companies To what extend do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regarding
...lmed or likely to make wrong purchases. regarding the former, local brands which are seem...
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Line 6, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...er opponents to become the best-seller. consequently, the widespread coverage of similar adv...
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Line 11, column 304, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...acted to limit platforms that companies use to broadcast their advertisements or in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, consequently, however, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, as regards, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25441696113 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38016480597 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0982277326 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.053507649887 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0197299889524 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210758721948 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340660435579 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00969034859917 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.29 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.27 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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