Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world with the development of technology, online purchasing is becoming more common. In my opinion, I believe that the advantages of shopping will outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, there are several unfavorable factors of shopping on the Internet. Firstly, nowadays, online buyers can easily fall for counterfeit products that may appear authentic. Secondly, online purchases may experience delays due to high demand or weather conditions, leading to longer wait times for delivery. For example, if you buy things on Shopee or Lazada, you will have to wait around a week, depending on weather or the number of delivered goods, you will have to wait for more than a week. On the other hand, I believe that the advantage of buying online will be more than the disadvantages. To begin with, buyers can receive a full refund if they are not happy with the commodity. For instance, one of the biggest e-commerce platforms such as Amazon also has 30 days return guarantee if you are not satisfied with their goods. In addition, in the modern world, many people are busy with their work, so they do not have time to go to the shop to buy the products they want. Therefore, purchasing online will help them save time and not waste travel time. Lastly, online shopping allows consumers to conduct thorough product research without being influenced by sales staff, resulting in more informed purchasing decisions. In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet have some drawbacks, it seems to me that it is a positive development and people should continue to buy online because of personal benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9926199262 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7139011013 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7585455361 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5384615385 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17744092399 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665145298181 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532451466098 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17744092399 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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