Task 1:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in Ho Chi Minh City. You moved to Manchester to study English three months ago. You have just received an email from a friend of mine, Sara from London. Read part of her email below.
What's Manchester like? I bet the weather's not too good! Have you still got that part-time job in the fast-food restaurant? It must be a good way of speaking to new people and making friends.
What about the family you're staying with? Do you go out much in the evening? I hope the English classes are going well.
Sara
Write a reply to Sara. In your email, you have to describe Manchester and the weather there, tell her about your part-time job, the family you are staying with, and your activities in the evening, and finally you have to write about your English classes there.
You should write at least 120 words.
Dear Sara,
How’s it going? I hope that you’re well and I’m really happy to receive your letter. It’s been such a long time since we last spoke, right? I’m sorry for not replying sooner, but I’m so busy studying to catch up with other students in here.
I’m writing with regard to my life in Manchester.
Firstly, the weather is quite hot because it is still summer no. I have to change my clothes three times a day due to my sweat body. Secondly, I still work as the waiter in the fast food restaurant which is near my house. People in that restaurant is so nice and the boss is very friendly, generous and even give me discounts if I suppose to eat my dinner in here.
Besides, I live in a flat with a foreign family. Despite hard work, they still come home as soon as possible to make a dinner together all the weekday so we rarely eat out. And on the weekend, they often invite me to going swimming with them to get well-built bodies. Last but not least, I have been trying my best to get on well with my friends as I can’t understand what they say. What a language barrier. That’s why I have to study in my English classes twice a week with native speakers.
Well, that’s all for now. Anyway, I must go and get on with my process. Give my love to your parents. When you have a moment, drop me a line and tell me about your life. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kindly regard,
Trung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: YOUR_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'your'?
Suggestion: your
...Dear Sara, How’s it going? I hope that you’re well and I’m really happy to receive yo...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you. Kindly regard, Trung
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, i suppose, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26666666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18783267116 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2607713503 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.8571428571 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107239117909 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348368545041 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544282933512 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577697704371 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496986685495 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.