Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, many people think that everybody can become an artist, while others suppose that only the talented people are able to create artworks. In my opinion, I strongly support the former statement, and the following essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people believe that art is only for gifted people. Firstly, a professional artist can be good at putting their feelings into the artpiece which makes people understand and empathize with their artwork. For example, Co vo which was created by Nguyen Khac Quang, a gifted painter, makes lots of people cry when looking at his artwork. Moreover, the talented artist can create a new style of art, which is advanced in their art and a talent affirmation. To illustrate, Ho Xuan Huong, who is one of the best poets in Vietnam, is making a new genre of poetry. Her poem is very unique and brings a new way of creating, which impresses readers.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that everyone can do their own artworks. The main reason is that there are a number of art universities and art courses for everyone who wants to learn about art. For example, arts is one of the compulsory subjects in primary schools and secondary schools. The pupils can draw a portrait or landscapes or whatever they like with tutorial teachers. Additionally, people, who love painting or are interested in music, also do their own piece of arts or songs. Beside the job, art also is considered one of the hobbies, which helps workers to release stress and relax. To illustrate, in the Vietnam war, soldiers also made poems or wrote lyrics in order to relax and describe the brave soldier in the war.
In conclusion, while many think that only talented people can become an artist, I would argue that art can be created by whoever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73981191223 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47337211098 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2035153467 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259284678713 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800114897744 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579609643354 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165651869763 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321591320626 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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