Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some students believe that they should devote their time and focus to study multiple subjects instead of single one. In my opinion, although a sole major promotes career development, students should place greater emphasis on acquiring a wide range of skills.
Proponents of a more concentrated effort argue that this approach stimulates professional development, Workers with in-depth knowledge concerning their respective fields are more likely to occupy senior role early in the employment career. Most companies prioritize promoting employees adept at a single subject due to their generally better overall performance. Furthermore, they can offer deep insights regarding their line of work and provide practical guidance for their subordinates, making them even more valuable assets to a given organization. As a result, paying full attention to a sole subject not only offers students the prospect of higher potential earnings but also more authority.
Advocates of interdisciplinary studies can point to its crucial role in ensuring job security. There is a strong likelihood that companies will terminate their employees in times of financial uncertainty, leaving many individuals with no income. This unemployment status typically lasts fox extended periods for workers who lack experience in other fields. Hence, gaining multidisciplinary experience can also be an effective backup plan in cases where there is a disruptive shortage in the job market. For instance, there were mass lay-offs in the hospitality during the global pandemic caused by corona virus and only those possessing knowledge in different fields could practically switch to other jobs.
In conclusion, despite increased opportunities for promotion engendered from specialization, student should pursue many subjects to ensure a more financially stable future. Universities should organize workshops to help students become well-informed and make better decisions with their academic path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86458333333 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10351992703 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1836821489 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277872629586 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886746735793 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527608847126 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16117482307 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398168534305 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.