In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that an ageing society is approaching in many parts of the world as people live longer and longer. I believe that there are more chanllenges than opportunities to be expected as the elderly make up a larger proportion of the population.
Elderly people often require caring services of a high quality, as most of them suffer from illness of some kind, and thus cannot take care of themselves. Also, relatively fewer young people would need to care more elderly people, which impose a heavy burden on the next generation, probably leading to a even lower birth rate and eventually worsening the situation further.
As mentioned above, elderly people can have a variety of medical needs, which translate into bills for the government to pay. At the same time, the size of working-age population shrinks relatively, contributing less to the national revenue. Consequently, the economics of the country would struggle as the expenditure grows and the income drops.
Although elderly people have rich life experience, more often than not they are not able to follow up the most up-to-date trends in art, technology and more areas. Therefore, the elderly are often considered less innovative than the younger, since innovation is all about creating something new. With the population ageing, the overall creativity of the society would be harmed, making it less lively, less flexible and less open to changes.
In conclusion, my view is that having more elderly people in the society causes more problems than it solves, which should absolutely draw more public attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18677042802 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72616345363 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0145260555 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344478115835 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120849660365 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930160471093 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190195125111 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590932918555 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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