the plans below show how a city center before and how it looks now
The maps illustrate the city how a city centrer has changed after some developments from 1950 until now.
Overall, the city centrer has witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being new buildings, a long lake, residential area and access roads.
In 1950, the town’s population was 20,000 and it has increased tenfold to 200,000. There was a small area for residents to the north of the major road running west to east, but now it has been expanded. However, the major road running north to south has still remained and the addition of counterparts on the bottom of the city.
The most noticeable that the A large lake has been created in the middle section of the river, with an bridge having been built to cross it. The buisiness district has been developed which is on the both sides of the river, and the residential area has surround completely it. The airport in the bottom right-hand corner has became bigger. The government building near the river has remained unchanged, although there is a new government building to the south. Futhermore, the river has been dammed in the east end of the lake.
- The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education so that they can at least read write and use numbers To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that governments should only fund scientific research that will benefit human lives e g lead to a curve for a disease or to an increase in food production Others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The given pie charts illustrate data about the percentages of expenditure of individuals on six different categories 11
- In many countries today if people want to find work they have to move away from their friends and families Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: the; A
...of the city. The most noticeable that the A large lake has been created in the midd...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n the middle section of the river, with an bridge having been built to cross it. T...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'surrounded'.
Suggestion: surrounded
...the river, and the residential area has surround completely it. The airport in the botto...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ential area has surround completely it. The airport in the bottom right-hand corner...
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Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ort in the bottom right-hand corner has became bigger. The government building near th...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...om right-hand corner has became bigger. The government building near the river has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81347150259 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53470104513 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.98689359 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809426031706 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309468844353 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690810631874 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726281252947 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093567335986 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.