The diagram provides data on the proportion of New Zealand community in
different age groups between 2011 and 2012.
From the statistics, it can be inferred that the population in New Zealand across
the ages shows a slight change within a year. Although the total of all ages has
gone up, in which the age under 40 years old has reduced small.
Looking at the table, the number of New Zealanders who aged between 40 and 64
has risen from 1,331,907 to 1,339,898. While at this age group the percentage of
the population has only growth about 0.6%, in those over 65 there is a more
breakthrough that it has surged remarkably to 4%. From there, the proportion of
the New Zealand community in all ages group has also progressed markedly by
0.6% from 4,381,269 to 4,410,284.
In the opposite trend to the upward trends, the proportion of people living in
New Zealand who aged between 15 and 39 and under 15 years old declined
minimally around 0,2% instead of increasing. However, the figures for the age
group from 15 to 39 years old still has the highest population compared to other
age groups in both years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75126903553 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51626162657 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3425352517 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412432272721 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189856513946 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774428381263 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130345067367 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756448495148 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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