In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Go along with living standards, the population in rural areas dwindles as residents leave for cities. From my perspective, I suppose it will create damage to local businesses and deepen the unemployment crisis in most modern cities.
A prime loss to rural businesses is evitable due to the fewer residents. With reducing in demand, suppliers will not fulfill the shortage in necessities anymore as they consider that place as unpotential, leading to inconvenience in rural daily life. For example, low sales volumes caused by the decline in rural resident numbers make it financially unsustainable for local brands. The closure of the grocery stores nearby means people there lose convenient and affordable shopping options that provide a vast range of products. Moreover, they also have to travel a long distance to access similar goods, which will create a hardship for their life and especially for those having unsuitable transportation.
A shrinking population frequently happens in cities that can give enormous opportunities for jobs. This, create a competitive market that can not sufficiently respond to versatile infrastructure. The more people migrate to the urban, the less life quality can be available. It means that profound unemployment persists even though it is said that there will be better amenities if they move to developing areas. This situation will worsen the service communities which are just stayed at a neutral level.
All in all, the decreasing rural population is negative evolution that poses challenges for rural businesses and profound unemployment in cities. These issues should be addressed and enact some reasonable adjustments to ensure sustainable growth in rural and balance well-being in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49442379182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99849558977 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8687091444 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13438573052 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453014696268 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372079228659 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802969275269 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345915706894 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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