Over the past several decades, technological development has been exponentially increased with novel innovations in terms of communication, electronic devices, scientific research, etc. The prompt states the two contrasting positions that, some people believe, significantly increasing technology reduces the opportunities for human communication, and at the same time, some of other people believe that technology provide a new and better roadmap to communicate and connect with each other effectively. I mostly agree with the second statement that, technology provides us a better way to connect or communicate with each other of human beings virtually in the sense of audio or video links easily for two reasons which I will discuss below. Even though, I do concede that in certain situations, technology play an adverse role to reduce the opportunities for human interactions.
First of all, Technology such as a mobile phone, internet facilitates to communicate without manual meet by the help of virtual communications like call, chatting, emailing, etc. For instance, prior to the early 17th or 18th centuries, there was no available of mode of technological communication, they were connected directly by manual meeting. In certain decade after, letter communication developed, and finally in 1973 when Martine cooper developed the first cell phone, then the opportunities for human interaction became easy. People were used cell phone for an audio communication. Furthermore, when cell phone was developed with webcam for video communication with the help of internet, again then even better for human communication. It was like a WOW situation. Now a days, many of the students travel to pursue their education better around the world and a people travel for work or job opportunities, leaving their parents, friends and relatives, but due to fast communication facilities, they are easily connect together via mobile call, video call like viber, messenger, Instagram call, etc. There is no need eager to meet by manual communication due to these facilities. Hence the above example illustrate that the technology bestows us with modish and better way of communication to each other.
Furthermore, the development of technology such as the internet (different social medias) introduce a novel way to communicate millions of people to each other and share their opinion, and feeling. For instance, now a days people are communicating through social media like, Facebook, TikTok, Instagram, and twitter. They are using the web applications and post one’s opinions, feeling and some other important latest news, recent events. They also use the applications which have the facilities like share, comments, likes. This is the result of mode of communications.
Although, the ease mode of communication systems, technology create a form of addiction disease to human life. People are spending a lot of time on social media without any specific remunerative reason. Consequently, human connection become sparse. For instance, currently, most of the time, people are spending, with smart phone which have different features (applications) like YouTube, TikTok, Video downloader system, chatting system, video call (Viber, Whatsapp, messenger etc). It makes too harder to connect with other person even that happen with own families and friends. Hence our prospects for personal engagement, are drastically curtailed by ever-increasing usage of technology.
In conclusion, technology plays a key role in the communication which connects people over a distance of mile. It facilitates us instant communication and save time needed for traveling. Despite that it has some diminutive point. In fact, technology enhance our life better regarding the communication system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 774, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...unication. It was like a WOW situation. Now a days, many of the students travel to pursue ...
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Line 2, column 778, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ation. It was like a WOW situation. Now a days, many of the students travel to pursue ...
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Line 2, column 1019, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
...mmunication facilities, they are easily connect together via mobile call, video call li...
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Line 2, column 1188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... communication due to these facilities. Hence the above example illustrate that the t...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...eir opinion, and feeling. For instance, now a days people are communicating through social...
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Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t happen with own families and friends. Hence our prospects for personal engagement, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3202.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60770577933 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15847724089 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516637478109 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1021.5 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.705473024 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3928571429 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46428571429 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494583965465 0.243740707755 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118485729135 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097228111819 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277403060443 0.150359130593 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109182111141 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.8971910112 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.