Educational institutions should encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers
In modern society, it is believed that Education is one of the basic right of every human being. After, the Industrial Revolution it became clear that education and smartness along with knowledge id the key to power and upgrade any nation in modern era. Education is the factor which helps human being's to solve any problem or issue faced by a society. Teacher's are said to be the role model who shapes the future of candidate in order to help him/her to achieve goals. The main task of teacher's is to identify the hidden talent of student's where he/she will contribute for himself/herself and welfare of human being. But what if candidate chooses wrong field as career and is unable to stay up to date and losses interest as he/she is no more interested. Careers are meant to shape the future of country and invite innovations which will take country higher on standard as well help in benefit of other citizens too.
For example, Scientists of ISRO () which we were able to successfully land a rover on moon's south pole in Chandrayaan-3 Mission. If, the teacher's of those scientists had diverted their mind to pursue career in some other field's then Indian's had never explored or dared to take such a step to set our country aside on international front. Scientists will do research about moon surface and will help mankind by knowing various facts about it. It's innovation and interest which encourage Government to allow ISRO to undertake such mission.
The same thing is followed in the case of Dr. Ambedkar the person who lead the committee in drafting constitution of India. If, the person was not knowledgeable and never had interest in foreign and internal affairs then Indians had never drafted the constitution. Dr. Ambedkar never wasted a single minute to doing useless or unimportant stuffs, he used to keep on reading and increase knowledge just for his benefit's.
In contrast, a friend of mine who choose the path of Full Stack Developer as his career which was not in his interest. After, some amount of time he was feed up with the task he received. He saw lucrative sum which was way higher as compared to design engineer in Mechanical field which was his area of interest was . But, later on he regretted the decision and felt sad for it.
Well it always matter's what we choose as our area of career whether it is interested or not, it is well paid or not but we always need to make sure that we well be always avid in our work environment and help achieve the desired goals. teacher's should always helps student to find their area of interest and help them to lead at least a decent life. Money is not the only thing which matter's in every aspect of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 649, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...an being. But what if candidate chooses wrong field as career and is unable to stay u...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns too. For example, Scientists of ISRO which we were able to successfully land ...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p on reading and increase knowledge just for his benefits. In contrast, a friend...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s career which was not in his interest. After, some amount of time he was feed up wit...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... saw lucrative sum which was way higher as compared to design engineer in Mechanic...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...field which was his area of interest was . But, later on he regretted the decision...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teachers
...ent and help achieve the desired goals. teachers should always helps student to find the...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...e desired goals. teachers should always helps student to find their area of interest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, at least, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64556962025 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50222194888 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516877637131 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.073200437 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179984680281 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462975658482 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370302042524 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845745635446 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399684124819 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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