The greatness of the individual's can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries
Greatness is a factor used to differentiate historical great leader which varies from place to place, ideology to ideology, and thinking to thinking. Greatness is not always related to welfare, charitable work, generosity or any other. It has to be related to work which is going to affect people life some how not in explicit but also in implicit manner. Greatness can be like helping in developing an constitution for equality among newly formed government or to be a apostle of any reform movement which will shape the future of country or minority on better path.
First is the example of Vladimir Lenin, the father of Bolshevik Revolution of 1917 in Russia. Who was known as founder of egalitarian government where every citizen work for the welfare of country no matter how much is your contribution. He formed such kind of government due to the circumstances, aroused during 1st world war, the Tsar was earning a lavish life while normal citizen's of Russia were dying due to scarcity of food. He is still recognised as father of nation in Russia, for his contribution to free working class from ruthless behaviour of Tsar.
Second is the example of Mahatma Gandhi, father of Nation of India. He is well known for his Dandi March along Sabarmati River to fight against British Colonizer's in peaceful and calmness way. Some citizen's do recognised him as father while some don't due to his ideological behaviour during partition of India and Pakistan. Those who don't believe in him say, Gandhiji was way more generous to Muslim's than Hindu's migrating to India. Even after massacre of people in 1947, he showed generous behaviour towards other's and let his people die. This kind of belief and disbelief vary from person to person.
Third is the example of Pablo Escobar, the drug lord of Medellin Cartel from Colombia. Who is known for his huge empire built on drugs but, some citizen's of Colombia say that he was generous people who helped people in building home and used to give money to every poor whenever he used to go out. Some even recognise him as Robinhood of Colombia, till date some still believe that he was not ruthless person and he was killed for no reason's.
I do not completely agree with the statement that individual's greatness is decided by those who lived after them rather than contemporaries. It does not hold true in each and every case, above mentioned example's either support the statement or violate somehow. Greatness will always vary from person's thinking and ideology he follow's. Some might feel like one individual is great while some may feel like he is not.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...rk which is going to affect people life some how not in explicit but also in implicit ma...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tness can be like helping in developing an constitution for equality among newly f...
^^
Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... among newly formed government or to be a apostle of any reform movement which wi...
^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... do recognised him as father while some dont due to his ideological behaviour during...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tition of India and Pakistan. Those who dont believe in him say, Gandhiji was way mo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...andhiji was way more generous to Muslims than Hindus migrating to India. Even aft...
^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ompletely agree with the statement that individuals greatness is decided by those who lived...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83820224719 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56756693184 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543820224719 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2672632418 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.523809524 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153051803942 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459039947975 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831337499428 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898174908302 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823990970595 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...rk which is going to affect people life some how not in explicit but also in implicit ma...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tness can be like helping in developing an constitution for equality among newly f...
^^
Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... among newly formed government or to be a apostle of any reform movement which wi...
^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... do recognised him as father while some dont due to his ideological behaviour during...
^^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tition of India and Pakistan. Those who dont believe in him say, Gandhiji was way mo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...andhiji was way more generous to Muslims than Hindus migrating to India. Even aft...
^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ompletely agree with the statement that individuals greatness is decided by those who lived...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83820224719 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56756693184 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543820224719 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2672632418 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.523809524 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153051803942 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459039947975 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831337499428 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898174908302 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823990970595 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.