Sport has an important role in society. Some people believe that it is nothing more than leisure activities.
Sport has an important role in society. Some people believe that it is nothing more than leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
With the development of sport industry, there are some argruments about the value of sports in our daily society. Whether it plays an important role or is nothing more than leisure activities. I will examine both views of this problem and outline my perspective in essay below.
It is understandable that why somebody tends to think that sport is nothing more than leisure activities. Apart from professional sport players who pursuit sport career, people often keen on playing sport just for certain purposes such as entertainment, keeping fit or a part of a therapy. Moreover, a large proportion of adult spend most of their time working, taking care of family and tend to think that playing sport is consuming too much time. Eventhough physical education is a compulsory subject in school, students who consider there is no necessary studying this subject are encouraged not to spend too much time playing sport instead of studying. All of these reasons contribute to the belief that sport is just a mean of entertainment.
Contrary to this statement, there are many evidences convincing that sport plays an important role in society. The first merit is that many researches are conducted to confirm that playing sport impacts positively on both physical and mental health by improve strength, flexibility, lengthen life expectancy and relieve stress. The second merit is that throughout playing sports, people are likely to learn new social skills and gain live experiences. Because of deep connection and mutual support in sports like football or volleyball, they can build up cooperation and interpersonal skill which will expand their circle of friendship and are benefical to their working or studying career. Finally, with the development of sport industry and celebrity status, it is believed to facilitate culture, tourism and diplomacy between countries. Therefore, sport can be judged as an important factor in our daily lives which takes part in the progress of developing society.
In conclusion, I hold a belief that sport plays an important role in society and not just an entertainment mean. Due to the benefit of playing sport, I keen on the opinion that sport should be widely encouraged in our daily lives and in education to raise people’ awareness of sport’s value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple often keen on playing sport just for certain purposes such as entertainment, ...
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...society. In conclusion, I hold a belief that sport plays an important role in so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80436654836 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1054606494 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.263157895 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402133087696 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150082629604 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153328418256 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292482212538 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14167558903 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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