Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money

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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money ?

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ngs that make them special. Additionally , with that special ability, they have to...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...asonable for a star to be paid too much.It is not equal for a celebrity to make so...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...esent. When they have a bit of a scandal ,their careers are almost empty. In co...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re almost empty. In conclusion, it is true that a celebrity makes a lot of mon...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...kes a lot of money when they really try.This really not wrong when a person is prop...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a lot of money when they really try.This really not wrong when a person is proper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61318051576 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45196131407 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9800413054 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237807394719 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804064975096 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827365220742 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14541119007 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593821104415 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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