1. What is the percentage difference between past year and any other year of people attended Super Screen movies?
This will help us understand how large or small is the difference and depending on that we'll be able to dig out the reasons behind it.
2. On what basis or factors the Super Screen movies are reviewed? Did these factors changed over past 2 years which might be able to explain why the reviews are good in spite of it people a not watching it?
3. Every year how much budget is allocated for marketing/advertising any Super Screen movie by the production house?
Changes in marketing budget can be a potential reason, people are not aware of quality of movie.
4. Memo states that production company will give greater share of its budget to reaching and advertising about the movie. By how much percentage they believe to increase the share will help their movies to have a better reach?
5. Super Screen Production Company needs to ponder about the facts and compare them. These facts can be cast, story writing , way of delivery of the message through the movie, editing ,etc which of the above factor didn't fall on place which might be the reason people are not finding interest to attend Super Screen produced movies.
6. Were there any iconoclast ideas which must have led the public to lose interest about the movies?
People come to movies for their entertainment and in any way if movie questioning their beliefs that will definitely give out incorrect message. If the movie is reprimanding someone then only increasing the budget share won't help. Directors need to be cogitative about their movie ideas.
7. Movie reviewers and the normal people watching the movie come from different background and have different perspective. The argument that reviewers of movie gave very positive reviews might not hold true ally. Production should consider to do a public survey about who watched their movies and how much they liked it and why? and how many of them didn't watch the movies and why?
8. Movie not hitting a success mark has various factors involved including at what all time of the year it was released and how much duration the movie was of? These comparisons and answers will help to evaluate the situation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... movies are reviewed? Did these factors changed over past 2 years which might be able t...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... These facts can be cast, story writing , way of delivery of the message through ...
^^
Line 11, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f the message through the movie, editing ,etc which of the above factor didnt fall...
^^
Line 11, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... editing ,etc which of the above factor didnt fall on place which might be the reason...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... definitely give out incorrect message. If the movie is reprimanding someone then ...
^^
Line 16, column 232, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider doing'.
Suggestion: consider doing
...t not hold true ally. Production should consider to do a public survey about who watched their...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 330, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ies and how much they liked it and why? and how many of them didnt watch the movies...
^^^
Line 16, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... liked it and why? and how many of them didnt watch the movies and why? 8. Movie n...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49555969603 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522077922078 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7265725281 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.70786347227 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 5.15768463074 213% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293983621481 0.218282227539 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985756778743 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775193124667 0.0701772020484 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124543884573 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827294862102 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... movies are reviewed? Did these factors changed over past 2 years which might be able t...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... These facts can be cast, story writing , way of delivery of the message through ...
^^
Line 11, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f the message through the movie, editing ,etc which of the above factor didnt fall...
^^
Line 11, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... editing ,etc which of the above factor didnt fall on place which might be the reason...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... definitely give out incorrect message. If the movie is reprimanding someone then ...
^^
Line 16, column 232, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider doing'.
Suggestion: consider doing
...t not hold true ally. Production should consider to do a public survey about who watched their...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 330, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ies and how much they liked it and why? and how many of them didnt watch the movies...
^^^
Line 16, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... liked it and why? and how many of them didnt watch the movies and why? 8. Movie n...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49555969603 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522077922078 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7265725281 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.70786347227 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 5.15768463074 213% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293983621481 0.218282227539 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985756778743 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775193124667 0.0701772020484 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124543884573 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827294862102 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.