Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Whether the legal system can or cannot resolve the issues of the modern society is a complex issues with arguments existing on both sides. The prompt mentions that the legal system, in fact, cannot solve the various issues that plague the modern society as law is incapable of influencing people's minds. On the contrary, I believe that the legal system and laws are indeed still germane and powerful in today's modern world.
Many believe that today's problem which include mental health issues such as loneliness and digital addiction cannot be resolved by the legal system. After all, the government cannot create a limitation to daily screen time of individuals as that would be a violation of right to freedom. Similarly, we simply cannot solve loneliness by imposing a fine upon lonely people and expect people to stop being lonely. However, factors contributing to loneliness such as discrimination can be addressed by penalizing discriminatory behavior and establishing provisions for mental health awareness programs. Thus, I while laws cannot directly solve certain modern problems, it surely can contribute in several indirect ways.
Moreover, to assume that law cannot influence human hearts would be presumptuous as the law certainly can affect people's mind as human beings tend to fear the consequences of activities punishable by law and thus, avoid participating in such activities. For instance, a person who considers painting empty walls of private property as fun is likely to resist his/her temptation to do so if he/she is aware that such activities of vandalism might leads to upto 20 years in jail. While law is not able to change the love of painting walls in the individual, it is certainly able to change his/her mind about vandalizing a private property. Hence, through awareness and fear of punishment, law can change the heart and mind of people
Additionally, modern societies consists of modern laws, which is created by taking modern problems into consideration and thus, making the legal system ever evolving like modern problems. For instance, while 100 year old laws might not include anything regarding limitations to production of CFCs for protection of environment and climate change, the laws created after discovering that CFCs deplete the zone layers lead to a global convention that did so. Hence, the continuous improvement of humans has led not just to ever-changing problems, but also ever-changing solutions.
Therefore, I believe that laws can change people s mind and hearts and can also solve modern problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...days modern world. Many believe that todays problem which include mental health iss...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g empty walls of private property as fun is likely to resist his/her temptation t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, after all, for instance, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28606356968 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8383665 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7337182435 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.133333333 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2666666667 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333119828616 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122764288756 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744376292266 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195181233234 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348463007062 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.