Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
People look to the government to fix their problems. After all, government is there to serve the people, but can government fix all of people’s problems, especially modern societal problems. The issue argues that many of modern problems cannot be solved by laws or legal systems because laws cannot change what’s in people’s hearts and minds. I mostly agree with this issue and will elaborate further in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, I must acknowledge the effectiveness of laws and legal system. While they might not be very effective at solving all kinds of modern societal issues, they have been very effective at solving some serious problems. For example, legal system and laws have shut down numerous organized drug business, laws against corruption have made government more effective. Laws do have the power to change people's minds albeit not on all matters but they do in fact hold some power and have shown that they are necessary.
On the contrary, many of modern societal problems are almost untouchable by law and legal system. For instance, the emergence of social media and the internet has bred almost an epidemic of mental health problems in youth. These problems are caused by people's own choices and the government cannot solve these problems. have establishing laws restricting people's access to the internet because that would be a violation of human rights and freedom after all not all people who use social media face these problems. It is the nature of modern societal problems that renders laws and legal systems ineffective. These problems can only be solved by changing people minds.
Lastly, laws rely on fear of punishment to work. they solve societal problems by acting as a deterrent. But fear is not the only effective solution to most problems in, fact, they might be detrimental in some cases. Some social problems can be solved through awareness and policies that reward good behaviors. For example, mass awareness about discrimination against gay people have severely influenced people’s perspective towards homosexuals. People are in general more accepting of gay people nowadays. This shows that it is possible to solve social issues without the use of laws.
In conclusion, this is a very complex topic. Nature of modern social problems is very convoluted and cannot be solved by one method alone, the legal system. Modern social problems required different approaches and do require change in people's hearts and minds to solve which the law may have a hard time doing in all the cases. Alternative approaches might be more effective and tackling some modern problems. It is true that law is effective and might be the only way to solve some problem; it is not true for many of the modern societal problems.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...government cannot solve these problems. have establishing laws restricting peoples a...
^^^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...aws rely on fear of punishment to work. they solve societal problems by acting as a ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minds solving'.
Suggestion: minds solving
...do require change in peoples hearts and minds to solve which the law may have a hard time doin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, so, while, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in some cases, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09691629956 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59932799876 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429515418502 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8824986788 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57692307692 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307016761053 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102820983197 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906591466295 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201943053067 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060244364987 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...government cannot solve these problems. have establishing laws restricting peoples a...
^^^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...aws rely on fear of punishment to work. they solve societal problems by acting as a ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minds solving'.
Suggestion: minds solving
...do require change in peoples hearts and minds to solve which the law may have a hard time doin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, so, while, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in some cases, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09691629956 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59932799876 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429515418502 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8824986788 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57692307692 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307016761053 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102820983197 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906591466295 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201943053067 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060244364987 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.