Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?
It is true that rules and laws are the basics of many modern societies. Therefore, it is sometimes argued that if people were able to do whatever they like, the society could not operate effectively. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, laws play a crucial role in protecting the safety of citizens and national stability. Initially, there are several regulations against violence, theft,.... which aim to maintain the quality of life of people. Thanks to this laws, people can be protected illegal activites, consequently feel secure about the safety of themselves and their families. In addition, it would be easier for goverment to manage society and bring country overcome challenges. Let’s take the outbreak of Covid-19 as an example. Since majority of Vietnamese inhabitants conducted social distancing regulation, this country could control this deadly pandemic.
A society could deteriorate in chaos if people’s behaviour were not curbed by any laws and rules. To commence with, if criminal activities were not regulated by government, the well-being of individuals and societies could be at stake. For instance, due to the lack of regulations, businesses can be bankrupted as vandalism or robbery. Furthermore, it can have a detrimental effect on our environment if there are no regulations. People can harm nature, exploit natural resources recklessly for personal gain as they do not have to bear any responsibility for the environment.
To sum up, I believe that society can be safe and functional only when rules and laws exit and set boundaries to people’s freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...eral regulations against violence, theft,.... which aim to maintain the quality of...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he quality of life of people. Thanks to this laws, people can be protected illegal a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31007751938 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04991229811 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7145471353 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218434294614 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598209237915 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749165325427 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144382723591 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090024113613 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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