The two pictures illustrates the alteration in the Spanish city of the Castellon between two separate years.
Overall, there are many changes and new building. Almost everything is innovated and added more, only a small part remaining the same.
After more than two decades, the only few things still intact as before are the university and port. Although the city center also retained, bike rental scheme was added. The main road for mean of transport next to the city center has been turned into a road for pedestrian only. Nowadays, between the pedestrian road essy to see that street and port arre the cinema, bars and clubs, but back to 2000 it was just an empty area.
The area with the most change is around city centre. In 2000, on the left side of the city center was the old market. Now, the new store has occupied this area and the market has been moved to the right side. Above the new store in 2000 was the train station, but overtime it was turned into a police station and above the new market ,an airport was built. The empty land between the university and the city center was converted into a new train station and right next to it is the train line. Including two plots of land on both sides of the university that are also urbanized by adding hall of residence and new shopping centre.
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The two pictures illustrates the alterat...
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... Castellon between two separate years. Overall, there are many changes and new ...
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... only a small part remaining the same. After more than two decades, the only fe...
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...ack to 2000 it was just an empty area. The area with the most change is around ...
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... police station and above the new market ,an airport was built. The empty land bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52320675105 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1477580747 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535864978903 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5677359887 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721083898226 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326997356946 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036501731781 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543266797113 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306166371253 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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