The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate recent changes in Castellon, which is a city in Spain, and compare the construction of the city in 2000 and now. Overall, in recent twenty years the city experienced huge reconstruction. Especially, many new buildings have been built while the period.
In details, there were not many buildings and services in the city in the year 2000. All the city had were a university, a train station, an old market, and also city centre, a port.
After about twenty years, the city have been modernized much. A new residence hall has been constructed on the left of the university. Having been cut down the trees which was on northern-east part of the city, new shopping centre have been built. New train station has been erected in the center, and the old one (on the east side of the city) has been turned into police station. A tramline has been established which connects the university and the city centre. Nowadays new airport is being constructed that means in near future Castellon will have the airline service. The old market has been converted to new shop, in addition new covered shop has been put up on the right side of city centre. The road has been replaced with footpath, and bike rental service has been installed in the city centre. As for the port, there are new constructed cinema, bars and clubs now.
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- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The pictures illustrates recent changes in Castellon, which is a...
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...ings have been built in that period. In details, there were not many building...
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...city in the year 2000. All the city had were a university, a train station, an old m...
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...arket, and also city centre, a port. After about twenty years, the city have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56473848025 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8242804117 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5714285714 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906645196606 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414841457176 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460138089838 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900806391438 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492172470904 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.