Task 2.The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects on people living in these cities? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people?
The rapidly increasing population in many cities nowadays brings about various effects on people living there. Challenges are how to maintain the quality of life. This essay will discuss both these impacts and solutions.
There are three effects that should be mentioned. Firstly, residents' growth can lead to overload transportation and traffic congestion. Because the development of transport infrastructure would not catch up with the increase of population. Secondly, environmental pollution would be an issue. A huge amount of waste in the metropolis as a result of crowded residents. People could not process this rubbish in time, which can cause pollution in water and air. Thirdly, the rise of people living in cities can promote more economic opportunities. Crowded cities might attract businesses and industries, leading to more job opportunities and economic growth. This positive effect can improve living standards for numerous residents.
To maintain the quality of residents' life in these cities, it is necessary for collaboration between the city authority and individuals. The first solution would be to invest in infrastructure. Cities should upgrade and expand their infrastructure to accommodate the growing population including improvement of public transportation, building affordable houses, and healthcare and education facilities. Moreover, to minimize the impact of the environment, the authorities in these cities should encourage using public transport, foster cycling or walking, create green space, and at the same time cities should have plans for sustainable development. Finally, these cities should ensure to develop economic diversification by attracting a range of industries and supporting small businesses to create a flexible market.
All in all, the growth of residents in cities can have both advantages and disadvantages on people living in them. Managing this problem is complex, however with thoughtful planning, investment and participation of the community, it is possible to maintain or even improve the quality of life of residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... transportation and traffic congestion. Because the development of transport infrastruc...
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Line 2, column 730, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iving standards for numerous residents. To maintain the quality of residents lif...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blem is complex, however with thoughtful planning, investment and participation o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76623376623 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18898609526 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0829421383 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4736842105 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371773386128 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104107160915 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829678706399 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233875733456 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648163127403 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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