“A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum.”
Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.
In your letter
• explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum
• describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
• give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for part-time voluntary work in Indra Gandhi Museum to provide the unpaid service to the community, particularly on week ends. Being a social animal, I have been doing social service since my childhood and I want to continue this captivating task to give me peace of mind as well as to keep me focus on my study. Because I am doing
education in History and, museums, historical monuments are the best way to teach me depth knowledge of historical eras.
Furthermore, being a student I have cognizant knowledge of history, therefore I can contribute to guide the visitors and teach them about the history during showing them in museum, addition to this I have great oratorical skills which can be beneficial to provide the information to visitors who will be visited to museum.
Moreover, recently I have completed my final exams, thus I can join this part time voluntary work from next Monday. Because I am totally free to provide the service to museum for betterment of society as well as to enhance my skills and knowledge toward history.
I hope you will consider my request to fulfill my dream, I would be waiting for your response regarding the same.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have been doing social service since my childhood and I want to continue this ca...
^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me focus on my study. Because I am doing education in History and, museums, histo...
^^^
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al eras. Furthermore, being a student I have cognizant knowledge of history, t...
^^
Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l to provide the information to visitors who will be visited to museum. Moreov...
^^
Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ed my final exams, thus I can join this part time voluntary work from next Monday. Becaus...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85046728972 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67768018563 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9218368157 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231150815861 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953802458416 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103387310749 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110395615094 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830409418527 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have been doing social service since my childhood and I want to continue this ca...
^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me focus on my study. Because I am doing education in History and, museums, histo...
^^^
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al eras. Furthermore, being a student I have cognizant knowledge of history, t...
^^
Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l to provide the information to visitors who will be visited to museum. Moreov...
^^
Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ed my final exams, thus I can join this part time voluntary work from next Monday. Becaus...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85046728972 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67768018563 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9218368157 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231150815861 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953802458416 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103387310749 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110395615094 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830409418527 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.