Some developing countries invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help the local companies to contribute to the economic growth. Do you agree or disagree?
As international firms are expanding their businesses all around the globe, which is favoured by one section of society, critics believe that assisting local firms is a fruitful step by the government for uplifting the economic state of the nation. I, however, believe that overseas companies play a more vital role in the development of the country.
The following reasons justify my notion regarding the invitation to large companies. First and foremost, multinational companies provide vast job opportunities to the natives of any nation, as they require a larger workforce for their functioning, and the packages that they offer to their employees are higher as compared to those of local companies. Secondly, they have more sophisticated techniques that not only allow for improving the quality of the labour but also provide them the chance to learn about state-of-the-art technology.
Moreover, due to international marketing and tie-ups, they have access to various kinds of help from any of the first-world countries and will be able to utilize the available resources to accomplish their staple needs. For instance, the growth of Nestle is mainly due to the fact that they are able to produce dairy products on a large scale with the availability of a massive milk supply. Furthermore, thanks to the overseas companies, local rivals become more competitive and innovative as they try to achieve the same level at which these international firms are operating, by virtue of which they can learn so many new techniques that they were not using previously, which in turn proves to be so beneficial for the customers. Last but not least, this step of government also helps to raise the standard of living of people because, with this, they can attach themselves to ultra-modern technology and all the latest techniques that they can apply in their daily lives to boost their way of life.
In conclusion, I reiterate my view that it becomes the need of the hour to invite foreign brands to establish their businesses for the effective and quick development of any nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hey offer to their employees are higher as compared to those of local companies. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13529411765 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92685335954 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6233207516 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.6 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140972406264 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589332009213 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356280042874 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888447552625 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00924289027687 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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