Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
For centuries, language is the major source of communication. It is argued that the annual extinction of many languages will lead to a more convenient life. I completely disagree with this statement which will affect the country‘s culture and tourism industry. The below essay will clarify the importance of language to culture.
It is obvious that a person's personality consists of the culture which was brought up there and the mother tongue of every country represents a country’s culture. A large number of events have occurred that transfer from one generation to the next generation in form of childhood stories that have heard of each family’s elderly during the lifetime. so with eliminating native languages and also incapability old person domination to a new language causes to stop transition historical and cultural stories to others. Even more, it would be more difficult for parents to say their emotions to their children. consequently, if the first language removes from our lives, it means, we should sacrifice a generation for adapting to a new language. those who have not understood the emotions and their country's ancient culture. In addition, the first language is a significant tourist attraction in each country. For instance, a large number of tourists travel to Japan annually because of Japan’s language. so omitting this effective element causes to fall in tourist percentage in Japan, as a result, Japan faces economical problems gradually and this would be a disaster for the progressive country.
An additional argument in support of uniting languages all around the world believes that with the same language making a relationship would be convenient for every person in the world so that has its advantages as well. For example, many businessmen are incapable to convince foreign investments to invest in their ability because of a lack of a common language. Therefore, this is a step forward to attract external investors to the country and as a result, enhance economically.
To sum up, a native tongue represents the ancient culture of a country so brings it with its personality, therefore, by removing this we delete the community’s identity in exchange for creating an easier relationship with the whole world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... importance of language to culture. It is obvious that a persons personality...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... to culture. It is obvious that a persons personality consists of the culture whi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...country represents a country’s culture. A large number of events have occurred that transfer from...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...h family’s elderly during the lifetime. so with eliminating native languages and a...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
...son domination to a new language causes to stop transition historical and cultural stor...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...o say their emotions to their children. consequently, if the first language removes from our...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...eration for adapting to a new language. those who have not understood the emotions an...
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Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...traction in each country. For instance, a large number of tourists travel to Japan annually becau...
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Line 3, column 1006, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...n annually because of Japan’s language. so omitting this effective element causes ...
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Line 3, column 1048, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: falling
... omitting this effective element causes to fall in tourist percentage in Japan, as a re...
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Line 3, column 1113, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...tage in Japan, as a result, Japan faces economical problems gradually and this would be a ...
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Line 3, column 1201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a disaster for the progressive country. An additional argument in support of un...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27071823204 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9924255488 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533149171271 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5144128954 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224901725656 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742896769606 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549851622556 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158715900733 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057991893643 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... importance of language to culture. It is obvious that a persons personality...
^^
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... to culture. It is obvious that a persons personality consists of the culture whi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...country represents a country’s culture. A large number of events have occurred that transfer from...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...h family’s elderly during the lifetime. so with eliminating native languages and a...
^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
...son domination to a new language causes to stop transition historical and cultural stor...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...o say their emotions to their children. consequently, if the first language removes from our...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...eration for adapting to a new language. those who have not understood the emotions an...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...traction in each country. For instance, a large number of tourists travel to Japan annually becau...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1006, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...n annually because of Japan’s language. so omitting this effective element causes ...
^^
Line 3, column 1048, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: falling
... omitting this effective element causes to fall in tourist percentage in Japan, as a re...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1113, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...tage in Japan, as a result, Japan faces economical problems gradually and this would be a ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a disaster for the progressive country. An additional argument in support of un...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27071823204 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9924255488 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533149171271 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5144128954 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224901725656 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742896769606 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549851622556 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158715900733 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057991893643 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.