Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem.
What are the causes of the increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem.
A scarcity of freshwater is seen in particular areas on the globe due to an insatiable demand from the humankind, which has turned the need for water supply into a severe issue. This essay will discuss the main reasons and offer some possible solutions to the matter.
There are two main causes of the shortage of the freshwater. The first cause is overpopulation. It means that the total number of Earth’s inhabitants are already substantial and this number is growing day by day. It is estimated that the world welcomes nearly 400,000 new-born babies on a daily basis. This rate of birth is likely to increase in the near future. The exploding population, therefore, is equivalent to a considerable use of clean water for domestic purposes. The final cause is water contamination. As industrial plants are constructed for bettering humans’ lives, water sources are adversely affected. Toxic wastes as well as harmful chemicals are discharged into waterways, denaturing quality of the fresh water. Furthermore, poisonous airborne substances from factories adhere to clouds, thus rain is made impure subsequently. The water would be no longer clean if it falls to a river.
There are two possible solutions to this matter. Firstly, governments of all nations around the world can collaborate to raise people’s awareness. Hefty fines for water pollution should be imposed on companies which dispose of waste liquids by releasing them into rivers and seas. Also, there should be cash incentives for any residents who keep natural water supplies clean. Besides, online programs and direct educational workshops should be established for everyone to have the knowledge of fresh water preservation. Finally, every individual can improve the situation by being careful of their quotidian actions. For example, household garbage should not be thrown onto water flows. Also, residents should not clean their unwashed bodies in natural water sources. Besides, aquatic plants purifying water should be cultivated on a large scale.
In summary, the worldwide problem of freshwater scarcity is caused by two reasons, and two measures can be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in particular, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3567251462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83287916021 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7099785176 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.652173913 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8695652174 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104426384757 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301349441306 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451661472737 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879549729686 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624103396471 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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