believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In most of societies, students just focus on their university subjects all of the time. But first world countries allow their students to learn different subjects and issues in addition to their paramount university courses. In my opinion, study about various issues can help the student to enhance the quality of their ability.
On the one hand, someone believe that university students not only should not be allowed to go to work during their education but also, they should not study extra useful subjects along with their main subjects. This makes tutee get better marks and understand their courses. This accrues in third-world countries. This makes tutees develop just in one dimension and not good for a government to nurture such students.
On the other hand, in high-level universities, graduates can study their favorite subject if they want along with their study courses. Although the main attention of these educators is the main subject they encourage students to learn about different things. Holding various attractive festivals and conferences is one approach that these universities do a lot. They believe it can help them in the real life.
Finally, there are a lot of several course topics that most of them are not useful in real life and cannot improve and affect your life. Hence, some graduates prefer to learn different subjects instead of their main courses. In some countries where the rate of unemployment is high, it happens.
In conclusion, there are different eyesight to this topic, but I believe that if people learn more especially practical subjects can help them and it is good for them.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the societies') or simply say ''most societies''.
Suggestion: most of the societies; most societies
In most of societies, students just focus on their universit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...just focus on their university subjects all of the time. But first world countries allow t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...eir ability. On the one hand, someone believe that university students not only shoul...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... This accrues in third-world countries. This makes tutees develop just in one dimens...
^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey want along with their study courses. Although the main attention of these educators i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can help them and it is good for them.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10861423221 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56134323672 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4829055806 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165118078971 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559835716856 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365098586035 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930294962448 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338652821987 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the societies') or simply say ''most societies''.
Suggestion: most of the societies; most societies
In most of societies, students just focus on their universit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...just focus on their university subjects all of the time. But first world countries allow t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...eir ability. On the one hand, someone believe that university students not only shoul...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... This accrues in third-world countries. This makes tutees develop just in one dimens...
^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey want along with their study courses. Although the main attention of these educators i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can help them and it is good for them.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10861423221 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56134323672 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4829055806 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165118078971 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559835716856 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365098586035 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930294962448 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338652821987 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.