In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should
be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how
these consequences shape your position.
History has shown that the success of a country or empire largely comes down to the actions of the people in power, which makes the choice of a country's leadership an absolutely essential and important decision in the hands of its people. The prompt suggests that there should be a change in leadership in all fields after regular periods of time, irrespective of the ability of the incumbent leadership. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the aforementioned statement for two reasons.
It must be noted that an able leader must possess the virtues of sound judgment, exceptional man-management skills and resilience to setbacks among other qualities, which likely diminishes the chance of a capable replacement in times of change of power. Such a leadership vacuum can often cause chaos in the executive circles and throw the organization's future into disarray. History has shown us several instances where the replacement of a strong, benevolent ruler by an incapable descendant resulted in a power struggle and ultimately led to the demise of powerful empires.
However, concentration of control for prolonged periods of time in the hands of a select few makes them susceptible to venality and egregious violations of power, and a proclivity for holding on to it for personal benefits. For instance, many dictators in modern history have been observed to gain absolute control of the country governments through any means necessary, and impose a despotic, totalitarian regime of authority, often enforcing their interests at the expense of the common people.
Moreover, a periodic change in leadership allows for a transition in leadership to newer, younger candidates, who often bring in a broad-minded and well-informed outlook to critical issues and are more willing to adapt to the constant changes prevalent in their fields of concern. For instance, there has been a steady decline in the average age of CEOs at various national and multinational corporations, signifying that the younger breed of executives are quite capable of building and leading profitable organizations and that age might just be a number when it comes to managerial experience.
In a nutshell, the lack of a capable replacement to supplant a well-established, outgoing leader can be calamitous for the organization or country's future prospects. However, the obvious risk of those in power falling into corruption and abuse of power necessitates a regular change of guard for long-term stability. With the right mindset and willingness to lead from the front, a relatively young, inexperienced candidate can overcome the initial hiccups and blossom into a strong-willed, pragmatic leader, ushering in an era of long-term prosperity for his country or organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
... the choice of a countrys leadership an absolutely essential and important decision in the hands of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35483870968 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17831064584 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555299539171 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0194708085 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.769230769 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3846153846 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119577400188 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432026266554 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023866062237 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666048245278 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195333335611 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.