The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of produce sugar from sugar cane.
It is obvious that, there are seven consecutives step which should done step by step. The farmer should provide seed of sugar cane which during 12-18 months it takes to growing. The process starts after 12-18 months and end by drying and cooling the final sugar.
As can be seen, for beginning the process sugar canes should have least 12 months, after that they hold up the harvesting either do by farmer’s hand or by machines. It is important to consider the cost of operates. Third step include crushing which all sugar canes hove to become juice by automate machine. Not only is this step very important for producing final drip but also should be consider to optimization operation. In this step uses a limestone filter to through juice inside it. this step known as purifying juice. After that the outcome from pervious step is feed to evaporator which juices into a compartment heat by fire to become syrup. In semi final step by a centrifuge all sugar crystals separate from syrups. Finally, all selected sugars store in a steel box for drying and cooling.
As a result, all these steps can do automatically and the operators just should monitor it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
...re seven consecutives step which should done step by step. The farmer should provide...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...producing final drip but also should be consider to optimization operation. In this step...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it. this step known as purifying juice. After that the outcome from pervious step is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, third, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43099863451 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.540061988 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180168999073 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765448231742 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093664850058 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148927884796 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131790388306 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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