Some people believe that it is beast to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
It has become a hot argument among people which they should accept their situation without considering any thing such as their less salary or job satisfaction, while according to some it is better to change your condition if don’t like it or prevent to your progress. Is such conditions people try to improve it. In my opinion, people should not accept anything easily because they create their fate and it is better to try upgrade either situation or him/herself.
On the one hand, people who would like to stay in a bad condition are very unable. Not only do have shortage of money to meet their needs and other costs but also, they don’t have any satisfy from their jobs. Since that a person involve with his/her job more that 80 percent of his/her life should has a very good satisfaction from it. people can get depressed or illness if don’t enjoy working. They would be accepted that condition because don’t want to change it or don’t have enough power to get better the situation. Hence, prefer to stay in such status in rest of their life.
On the other hand, there are lots of people who want to get progress and change their lives to extend a better life. Although they don’t ensure about the outcome of their work people choose to take risk and try every condition to improve the situation. Infect, they are so motivated and hardworking because of their goals. It is a very good feature that make a person get progress in any condition since they don’t like to be a useless and week person.
In conclusion, there are two types of people who want stay in their situation even is bad and second group related to powerful people. These people can remake everything. I think a person should not accept anything easily to have to fight for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...ept their situation without considering any thing such as their less salary or job satisf...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... that 80 percent of his/her life should has a very good satisfaction from it. peopl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62738853503 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3382845741 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480891719745 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9482355836 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209106966267 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780562338941 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663008892104 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143583186543 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854970345675 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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