The most important aim of science should to be improve people’s lives.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although there are lost of aims and taks science the most important of them is improve the quality of people’s lives. Undoubtedly, scientists have a crucial role to discover new methods which can help to promote a person life. In my opinion, I strongley agree and believe that whiout science living get harder.
On the one hand, by growning the technology and present them people have more tendency to use and they become a popular among people. For example online shops which a person can shopping online. Not only can a person safe his or her time and his or her money but also, the person has various choice to select different goods and products with a good offer. However, this makes remove some retail markets and some people lose their jobs. Technoloy changes your life extremely to extend and make you happy.
On the other hand, improving people’s lives is not the only task of science and there are numerous different goals and aims, but the most important and the first aim is it. Some other goals like find out about past generous, ancient cities, and extinct animals can be mentioned. Hence, every field of science and every subject has sme subaims and a target goal which is promote of the life quality. In addition people can use and get familiar with different subject and know about them which make help in real life. By knowing about various nutrients a person provide a very good recipe and enjoy eating.
In conclusion, all of sicence prepare a very good situation for people that get their lives better and enjoyable which is the most important task of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...s science the most important of them is improve the quality of people’s lives. Undoubte...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
... the only task of science and there are numerous different goals and aims, but the most important ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
... sme subaims and a target goal which is promote of the life quality. In addition people...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...hich is promote of the life quality. In addition people can use and get familiar with di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73550724638 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25801973399 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2367051831 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229056224887 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078187854391 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831251989203 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142679343644 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472215547789 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.