Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although there are individuals who agree and believe that growing pets can have some benefits for children. There are opponents to this idea who are worried about the consequences and diseases that may be caused by animals. So this essay will try to cover and discuss the two opinions fairly.
Bringing a pet to your home may has a great impact on your children’s personality, and their traits can be affected also. Your kid wouldn’t feel lonely anymore because whenever he has free time he can go and play with his pet, not only for entertainment but it can affect their mentality by giving them the feeling of being responsible especially in their early years. For example, when you buy a cat to your daughter she would treat it as if it were her mom and take care of it by feeding it. So this feeling would give her a sort of sense of responsibility.
Adopting pets has many disadvantages for your children either on their lives or their health.it is clear that Children have a weak immunity so their health can be affected easily and as we know nowadays most of the animals have skin diseases which may transfer to your child. Furthermore, your children lives can be in danger as result of a bite because as we know a dog’s bite can lead to death.
To conclude, adopting pets has pros and cons but it is easy to avoid the disadvantages by choosing the pet carefully. In my opinion, growing a pet have many benefits and can be useful for your child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55303030303 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60676523244 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9968848586 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18956916926 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805882341094 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405335382275 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125396070002 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00993108876025 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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