Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
From the earliest ancient civilizations to the present day, humanity has constantly been searching and aspiring for a utopia with fulfilled needs and perpetual prosperity for humankind. Yet, we are still uncertain about the complete concept of this perfect society, as well as its constituent elements. In this essay, the most fundamental element of an ideal society, which I personally believe to be agriculture, will be analyzed before presenting several strategies for countries to achieve prosperity.
There are various factors attributed to a utopia in modern days, chief among them is sustainable agriculture. Indisputably, food is a basic need of humankind as it is essential for the energy generation and metabolism process which fuels all human activities, from breathing and walking to heavy work and logical inference. Without sufficient food supplies, citizens might incur physical defects and lack well-being due to poor diet and malnutrition, which might adversely impact societal health. This can lead to numerous ramifications, especially its threats to the predominant labor force who require adequate nutrition to maintain their productivity. To exemplify, some African nations like Nigeria and Congo, which paid most attention to developing industry and exploiting minerals in the past century, are now suffering terrible food crises due to the inability to provide enough food and the lack of agrarian development. Consequently, famines have inhibited those nations from thriving and kept them in poverty and impoverishment for decades despite their abundance of resources and labor. Moreover, as the population is rapidly proliferating around the globe, it is crucial for nations to give more consideration to developing agriculture in order to guarantee food security. Therefore, a long-term and developed agrarian industry should take precedence over other elements due to its pivotal and fundamental importance to modern society.
In order to construct an ideal society, besides the imperative demand for investment in agriculture, there are several elements that should be taken into consideration. The first one is education, due to its immense importance to labor quality, which directly determines the development in all areas of a country. To truly develop this, nations should abolish or diminish tuition fees to make education more affordable and accessible to every citizen, which also implies constructing more schools and educational infrastructure in all regions. Secondly, countries need to create a sustainable economy that mainly targets green and environmentally friendly fields like electric products or biotourism. By implementing this, more jobs will be created, which can help citizens attain a stable livelihood and heighten their income. Thus, it would also foster global trade and economic activities while still preserving environmental values, which are crucial for an ideal society.
In conclusion, agriculture should be regarded as the fundamental factor constituting a perfect country. Other elements like education or a stable economy should also receive attention from future planners and all humankind. There are numerous steps to fully attain them, but they are necessary for human society to thrive and gain prosperity, becoming an ideal and worth living place for all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2846.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 498.0 315.596192385 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71485943775 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07050109398 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580321285141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 506.74238477 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3914242326 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125005487442 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374191745988 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311864577905 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844271785787 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323160243735 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 78.4519038076 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.