The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given table shows the survey results from club members and the general public regarding an unspecified town's new theatre in 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the vast majority of opinions were ranked excellent in all three categories, whereas only a small percentage of survey participants ranked any category as poor.
In terms of club members, 72% found the theatre facilities to be excellent, while 26% were satisfied and 2% said they were poor. Meanwhile, 54% of members said the theatre information was excellent, while around one-third were only satisfied. The quality of the theatre was ranked as excellent by 88% of the members, while 10% were satisfied, and 2% ranked them to be poor.
On the other hand, 64% of the general public ranked the facilities as excellent, with only 24% merely satisfied. Furthermore, two-thirds of the public thought the information was excellent, while 20% were only satisfied. Additionally, while 53% of the public thought the quality was excellent, 7% ranked it as poor.
- The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5 78
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both thes 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make any comparisons whe 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...urvey results from club members and the general public regarding an unspecified towns new thea...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'town'?
Suggestion: town
...general public regarding an unspecified towns new theatre in 2012. Overall, it is ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...poor. On the other hand, 64% of the general public ranked the facilities as excellent, wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16265060241 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79375872637 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.018923402 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922964175203 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488916841321 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055209482481 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748238253066 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635587340262 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.