The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The picture illustrates how the Central Library has changed over the period of the passed 20 years.

Overall, it is apparent that all the facilities have been removed or replaced, except for the entrance.

Specifically, in the middle of the hall, tables and chairs were available bu have now been removed. Regarding the left-hand side, the computer room was replaced by a reading room for magazines and newspaper. Additionally, to the north of this room, a complete removal of the zone for games has been witnessed, which was for a children’s room to be established and storytelling events to be held. The valley for all reference books was also set up substituting that for adult’s fiction books, which was located between the aforementioned reading and gaming room.

In terms of the other side, the room for children’s book in the north and the enquiry desk in the south were erected to make space for a lecture room and a café to be operated. The valley between those two rooms, which used to be for adult non-fiction books, has now been taken advantage of to install a number of amenities, including three self-service machines, an information desk, and adult fiction books.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, as for, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.985 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84214267763 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1623231894 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.625 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0412494250194 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263668446919 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471929257899 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436854752327 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588534388865 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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