Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Is success the only way to measure intelligence? This essay agrees that Success is one way to measure intelligence, but it is not the only way to measure and often not the most important one. This essay will discuss that Success reflects intelligence and other opinion that intelligence can measured in other ways.
It is a common belief that success is a measure of intelligence. Being an intelligent person helps you to achieve goals, to gain more skills, to be a risk taker and think deeply about things. For example, there is an Egyptian singer called “hamo bika,” he is not smart person, but he made money by singing a popular song that had no meaning or feelings, but it made people dance.
On the other hand, Success is not the only metric of intelligence. There is another key point to measure intelligence. For example, Emotional intelligence, social skills, to be able to adapt with changes in life, opportunity, and motivation toward goals. For example, software developers used their intelligence to develop apps, systems and websites that help people and fields but, they use skills like problem-solving, decision-making skills, strategic thinking, and adaptability, not only being smart person.
In conclusion, being smart does not mean being successful, and being a successful person does not necessarily mean being smart. Intelligence can contribute to success in varies ways. It is a combination of skills that help us to achieve success. In your life you must choose the definition of success that suits your perspective and help the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Is success the only way to measure intel...
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Suggestion:
...s your perspective and help the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98155134745 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9984165864 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40139379396 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148349284648 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109447124158 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232630941542 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106157146093 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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