The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six
countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides information about the median age of men and women when they retired in australia, united states, japan, italy, france, and korea in 2003.
Looking at the dataset in more detail, it is clear that the mean retirement age in australia, united states, japan and korea is over 60 years. Korea has the highest age of retirement, is 68 years 8 months for men and 67 years 2 months for women. In japan, the avarage age of retirement is 67 years 4 month and 66 years 9 months for male and female, is the second top age in the table. United states, and australia had retired at the age of 65 years 6 months and 64 years 1 month for male, 64 years 2 months and 63 years 5 months for female respectively.
Turning to the remaining information it is evident that, in italy and france, the age when people retire is below 60 years. France had the lowes age of retirement, is 57 years 4 months for men and 56 years 9 months for women.
Overall, it can be seen that the retirement age of korea is highest for both males and females in the table whereas france has the lowest age when people retire. Additionally, males average age of retirement in every six countries is higher than females.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-09 | trinhthanh1 | 78 | view |
| 2024-06-22 | Zahid6400 | 67 | view |
| 2024-06-22 | Zahid6400 | 67 | view |
| 2023-10-29 | nguyen.ttn1998 | 70 | view |
| 2023-08-17 | TLan168 | 73 | view |
- Claim Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today Reason We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both Write a response in which you discuss the extent to w 58
- The diagram below shows the process of getting a driving license Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below 67
- The three pie charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- It is important for everyone including young people to save money for their future To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- In some countries it is compulsory for all young people to join the armed forces for some time What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army Does participation in community work qualify as an alternative 56
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable, so consider using: '4 months'.
Suggestion: 4 months
...e avarage age of retirement is 67 years 4 month and 66 years 9 months for male and fema...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42342342342 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43816475039 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454954954955 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6421183305 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169333712733 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100891133758 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666794347794 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134337451582 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619378763033 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable, so consider using: '4 months'.
Suggestion: 4 months
...e avarage age of retirement is 67 years 4 month and 66 years 9 months for male and fema...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42342342342 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43816475039 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454954954955 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6421183305 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169333712733 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100891133758 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666794347794 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134337451582 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619378763033 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.