The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map give some information about an island before and after its construction.
It is obvious that the island changed a lot after recreate and add lots of facilities for tourists.
As can be seen before the construction there was not any way pass to the island. There were 16 accommodation for tourist who travel to this island and wanted to stay there. In addition a reception located in the center of island and above of it is a restaurant for passengers. At the south of island and in the middle located two sailboat for the emergency condition and come and out of passengers to the island. The western of the island there is a beach that in new map utilize for swining. Although there is footpath to the beach from accommodation, a vehicle track use for reciprion and restuarnt.
As result, the two maps shown in 100 meters scale and all facilities illustrate in new map. There were very good facilities in the new map after construction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
The map give some information about an island before...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun accommodation seems to be countable, so consider using: '16 accommodations'.
Suggestion: 16 accommodations
... any way pass to the island. There were 16 accommodation for tourist who travel to this island a...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sailboat seems to be countable, so consider using: 'two sailboats'.
Suggestion: two sailboats
...uth of island and in the middle located two sailboat for the emergency condition and come an...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties in the new map after construction.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65476190476 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78395854317 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4271538768 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256202001593 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10566210086 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757176361448 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17352297322 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766612663372 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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