“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they
enter college.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples
shape your position.
I agree with the given statement.Students before entering the college should study the same national curriculum.This helps the students be on par with the one another with equal and same knowledge gained while entering the college.If we have different curriculum then one student might know one subject and another might not.For example if a school curriculum includes Indian history,geography in its curriculum and the other school does not have those subjects in it's curriculum.Instead it has history related to europian countries.This leads to a knowledge gap between students of same nation.One student might know about indian history and other doesn't.So students might not be able to share their interests with eachother if they do not have common things to share.This may lead to division of students between themselves based on their studied curriculum.If the above difference in curriculum is not present and every student study the same curriculum during their schooling then it leads to more friendliness by sharing their common interests,Having the same national curriculum also helps the students feel that there is no partiality in regards to the knowledge that have been tought in different schools.Some schools charge high fees so that they teach all the extra courses for the students of their school.This leads to knowledge gap between the students because only rich will be able to afford for such type of schools.Poor students will not be able to gain that knowledge leading to significant knowledge gap between students of same communities.Therefore,having a national curriculum common to everyone until they enter college is neccessary.After entering into the college student can explore their interests accordingly and move on.But it should be till the schooling level only becuase students get some kind of maturity as they enter the college and they will be in a position to decide which is good for them.They will be able to figure out what their interests are and will study those subjects accordingly.Hence a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
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...chool curriculum includes Indian history,geography in its curriculum and the othe...
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...liness by sharing their common interests,Having the same national curriculum also...
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...udents feel that there is no partiality in regards to the knowledge that have been tought in ...
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...n students of same communities.Therefore,having a national curriculum common to e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34226190476 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30477643188 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473214285714 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 23.0359550562 1459% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1795.0 118.986275619 1509% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 23.4991977007 1430% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 5.21951772744 1686% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31778003198 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.31778003198 0.0831039109588 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31778003198 0.150359130593 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 171.7 14.1392134831 1214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -278.02 48.8420337079 -569% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 135.5 12.1743820225 1113% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.98 8.38706741573 274% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 11.2143820225 1216% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 136.0 11.7820224719 1154% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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